Short critique of the ‘Creature of the night’-
The title was engaging and drew me in, and upon the first few seconds of the audio narrative the ambient noise was of a great quality and seemed to fit the title, however when the interviewee began, the ambient sounds and music had nothing to do with what was being said. The twist in narrative arc was great with the interviewee introducing himself towards the end rather than at the start was different and gave a great effect as the main point of the narrative was stated at the end (Working night shifts at McDonalds).
The interview was clear and concise however the use of some slang made it hard to follow especially because it was repeated twice towards the middle of the recording. other than this, i enjoyed the way the story was twisted in a way that still remained truthful to the subject. gathering emotion when necessary.